Film
This is the first edit of our final media film. We edited all the clips together to create an outline of what our final film will look like. In this edit we haven't added music yet or any credits. By making this first edit without key components such as music allows us to take feedback from our audience on the storyline alone and make it the best it could be, as music creates a large impact and could mask some improvements we could make.
The Reaction:
We asked two members of our class to watch our first edit and tell us their thoughts, this was Molly Braggins and Jessica Underwood. We thought they would be helpful people to ask as they are in our target audience in terms of age as they are both between 16-17 years old. They are also media students themselves so we thought they would offer helpful advice from an education perspective. After we showed them the clip we asked them some questions for us to get some constructive advice.
What We Did Well:
From our feedback we gathered that we told the story well through the use of filters and makeup and editing to show the deterioration of her mental health. Another piece of positive feedback we received was that ambient sound added was good and fit into the scene well. The example they used was the bird song added during the beginning of the opening, our feedback stated that it added a calming tone to the scenes
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